That was actually very good! I definitly don't think you should leave it as a one-shot. Its very creative, just taking the old 'monster under my bed' and putting a new spin on it. It feels a little rushed though, as if the poor boy is trying to tell his life story in five hundred words or less :)
I really did like it, and I wouldn't mind a story made out of it just one bit! Very nice job, keep it coming :)
in theory i would have liked this. but it kinda seems strange that all of a sudden the monster stopped raping him and like i dunno it seems like it was trying to mate with him or something. also most people know what fucking raw means. you probably didn't need to explian it.
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