Sorry I didn't review before. I kept meening to but never got to it. But I have been reading and loving it! I'm usually not one for mysteries but with Exit mysteries are fantastic lol. I had a new jack-finds-out-about-topher scene in my head and this totally wasn't it so good job at being predictably unpredictable. I really wanna know what happens! And what topher said to jack! Ahhh! This is killing me! And I caught The Empress reference! Does this mean that Sam is in this too?! At least a little bit?! Is Jack gunna see him?! Ahh! I just know I'll be dead by the end of this story. I can't handle it's amazingness. It's too fantastic!I gotta know what happens!
I really like this story and have been following this series from the beggining, I like Exit alot but... i cant believe he's getting away with his behaviour so easily! (which endears him to me most the time!!) I hope he's made to feel some remorse for how badly jacks feeling in future chapters perhaps with jack not letting him have sex... which is his one major driving force throughout the series and would effect him the most. However it seems he has already got away with it and they will be getting in the sack soon enough... at least make Exit suffer somehow... (though the sex scenes are hot) he needs to grow up a bit and it would be good to see him not so flakey.
i really do love this story though and the rest of the characters especially topher, its a shame the captain dumped him so easily i really liked the captian so i hope he see's the errors of his ways and really regrets taking on the new pet. look forward to the upcoming posts!
I feel so bad for Jack! And I'm a bit confused. Did Exit say that jack will come visit but not stay with him? Why won't jack stay at Exit's appartment? Because of Topher? Put him on the couch and let exit and jack have the bed for some fun! And I definitely want to read the jack/sam reunion. Let me know when you put that up. But I understand what you said about it not having anythingg to do with this story's plot. So sad. Oh well. But theere has to be a happy ending for exit and jack! Please say there is! I like jack better than topher anyway. Can topher fall madly in love with someone else? Jack and exit need to stay together no matter what! Can't wait for Saturday!
Wow!! We definately couldn't do without the sex scenes, that was one steamy chapter! And im glad jack got to let off steam too! I'm reading this story covertly on my ipad in a 2 hour car ride to the Norwich coast. Talk about squirming in my seat! Thank god the iPads big enough to cover up my problem!
Thanks for clearing up quint and tophers parting, I'm still bummed about it, I liked quint so I hope he comes back somehow in this story. I agree topher gaining independence is great but i still think he needs a more forceful man than exit to keep his smart mouth in line, they seem more brotherly than loverly to me. He needs more of a challenge! he really is one of my fav characters! So i can't wait to see what you do with him.
I hope exit manages to keep hold of jack... Although hopefully jack doesnt make it easy for him!!! It cant be plain sailing for him without any consequences....But after this chapter it looks like he's gonna be fine for now....The horn dog!
Great story, will read this more thouroughly when I get home tonight, I had to skim some bits, it got to hot in the car I think I was flushing!
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