Boy that Trent sure is an asshole. What did his mother ever see in him? And speaking of his mother: how could she let Trent treat her son that way? Does Trent control her too? And how could she let her daughter treat her brother like that?
Sam's lucky to get away, if only for a year. Hopefully he'll enjoy himself at school and forget about his horrid family.
Ok, here is your review ya little brat lol. I like it so far. Jumps around a bit though. And in the 3rd chapter there is a minor error in the chapter mentioning that Sam can't see himself going back to Italy. Now, can I kick the crap out his family? Ellie not included of course. Though trent is going to get more then a little ass kicking. He is going to find himself with a new asshole maybe through the spine >.> *hugs Sam*
Yeah, yeah poor Sam; having two boys who like him....hmmm, that's tough; wish we all had it so tough. lol
So what's the story w/him and home in Italy? Besides his abusive and controlling step-father? And asshole sister? Why couldn't he talk about leaving Italy and going to school in England? And is university like a college? Or is that part of high school? In the first chapter it was mentioned that he wanted to finish his last year of university away from his family. But he's only eighteen, so technically, didn't he just graduate from high school? Or is university the same as high school in England? Oi, I'm so confused....Wait, I just remembered, Jacob is almost twenty, so he's way too old for high school, yet he's at the same university as Sam...now I'm doubly confused. lol
Anyway, awesome two chapters! Looking forward to more! :)
Wait, what? The university can't control if you get your hair cut or if you change your hair color!
And Sam never mentioned Jacob's name, so how did Ellie know this? In the sentence where she said the dye should take half an hour to set, then she said, "Now tell me about this Jacob." But Sam never told her his name.
I bet Same looks awesome all with silver and green tips!lol Wonder what Jacob and Daniel will think?
Ok, Reader's Digest version: Great chapter! Poor Sam, now he has to watch out for Nathan and his goon. And then he's not going to be happy at all if he finds out Trent is coming. Poor Sam can't get away from them. :(
Also, this isn't a vampire story, is it? I noticed it was written that Nick's canine teeth were sharpened. This is a regular story, right? I didn't notice a vampire tag, otherwise I wouldn't have started reading. So I'm hoping the teeth were just mentioned for the hell of it. :)
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